How to tell a story

How to tell a story

Wednesday, July 23, 2014

Former students

Always great to hear from former students. One, Jeremiah, just checked in, bringing me up to date. He has a job in fields he likes, film and sports, but parenting has taken so much time he's done little writing but he can catch up on that later.

He wrote an adaptation for film of Sherwood Anderson's Winesburg, Ohio that I greatly admire. Here it is.

Jeremiah Rickert
WINESBURG, OHIO
A Screenplay
Based on the novel by Sherwood Anderson 




FADE IN:
EXT. WINESBURG – MAIN STREET – NIGHT
SUPER: Winesburg, Ohio, 1900s
The town is still.
A flatbed wagon, driven by a MAN, 50s, upsets the stillness.
He’s chugging whiskey from a bottle.
The Man laughs and toasts the local church as he passes it.
The night-watchman HOP HIGGINS, a grizzled man in his 50s, finishes lighting a nearby lamp and watches the wagon pass.
The driver toasts him as well.
DRIVER
All’s well, Hop Higgins, All’s well!
At the end of Main Street the wagon passes a rickety hotel.
The driver waves at the sign out front that reads “New Willard House.”
The wagon passes the edge of town and the man takes a chug and whips the horses.
A train whistle blows in the distance. 
The man whips the horses harder and harder, accelerating into the night. 
The train whistle gets louder and louder. 
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