How to tell a story

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Wednesday, May 6, 2015

Five Openings

FADE IN:

EXT. A COUNTRY ROAD - DAY

A long FUNERAL PROCESSION is driving down a country road in New England to a cemetery. We notice a YELLOW CAB in the procession. As the line of cars proceeds, we hear EMIL's voice-over:

EMIL (V.O.): Marg, I say, you're going to too many funerals. It's not healthy. I think it's making you depressed. A good friend, somebody you've known for years, I can understand it. But look at you.

INT. CAB - DAY

In the cab above is MARG, 70ish, who has the energy of a woman twenty years younger. She sits in back, dressed entirely in black.

EMIL (V.O.): Somebody you went to grammar school with and haven't seen since, you go pay your respects. Somebody's kid you never met once, you go. You go to so many funerals, nobody will take you any more. I gave up, your daughter gave up, who's left? So you take a cab. Who goes to a funeral in a cab, I ask you?

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 FADE IN:

              EXT. OUTDOOR CAFE - DAY

              People fill tables at an outdoor cafe in the city on a
              beautiful spring afternoon.

              At a table sit JOE and TRICIA, a handsome couple in their
              20s. Tricia wears a designer jogging outfit; Joe is dressed
              casually in slacks and sportcoat.

              Tricia is visibly agitated, while Joe sits calmly, sipping an
              espresso.

                                                          TRICIA
                                    I can't believe you're doing this -
                                    especially now.  We were going to
                                    Washington next week.

                                                          JOE
                                    We can still do that.

                                                          TRICIA
                                    What's the point? A final fling
                                    before you leave?

                                                          JOE
                                    I told you six months ago I'd
                                    probably be moving.

                                                          TRICIA
                                    I thought you'd change your mind
                                    since everything's been so good.  Or
                                    so I thought.

              Several tables away, watching the couple closely, sit HELEN,
              60s, and AMY, 40s.

                                                          HELEN
                                    I bet he's telling her that he told
                                    her six months ago he'd be leaving.
                                    That's what he told me.

                                                          AMY
                                    And to pay closer attention.

              At the other table:

                                                          JOE
                                    You have to pay closer attention to
                                    what I'm really saying, not what you
                                    want to hear.  I've never lied to
                                    you, Tricia.

                                                          TRICIA
                                    I just can't believe you can do this
                                    so goddamn easily!

              She gets up from the table, throwing down her napkin.

              Watching the scene:

                                                          HELEN
                                    "I've never lied to you."  I bet
                                    that's the line that gets her.

                                                          AMY
                                    That line was the last straw for me,
                                    too.

              At the table, Joe gets to his feet while Tricia is moving
              off.  He MOUTHS the very words that Helen is expecting and
              repeating to Amy.

                                                          HELEN (O.S.)
                                    "I never lied to you!"

              Then he calls after her:

                                                          JOE
                                    Tricia!

              He sits back down, looking more resigned to the inevitable
              than upset.

              At the other table, Amy leans forward to confide something,
              as Tricia stomps by the women's table in a huff.

                                                          AMY
                                    It was summer, in 1976, the
                                    Bicentennial.  I can remember it like
                                    it was yesterday.  I loved that man
                                    so much.  I was only 19.

                                                          HELEN
                                    Spring of '55 for me, dear.  But we
                                    don't want to lose her, do we?

              Helen gets up, Amy quickly behind her, and they take off
              after Tricia.

              Also overlooking this scene from another table has been
              GEORGE, 30s, who now moves to sit down across the table from
              Joe.

                                                          GEORGE
                                    I bring you greetings from home.

              He makes an unusual gesture with his hands, like sign
              language, and a LIGHT GLOWS in the palm of his hand.

              Joe's eyes widen.

                                                          JOE
                                    You're . . . ?

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FADE IN:


EXT. BRITISH COLUMBIA - WOODS - NIGHT

A gang of MEN holding flashlights and torches chases someone
through the woods.

The object of their hunt is VICTORIA LESEUR, late 30s and
looks younger. She wears a formal gown that is blood-stained
and torn.

Victoria looks terrified as she races ahead of the pursuing
gang. And with reason: the men are gaining.

Victoria sees an obstacle ahead, a mountain of stone. She
struggles to reach it before the men catch her.

The men also see the mountain.

                      MAN
           She can't get far now!

They run even harder. The lights dart ahead of them like
volleys of bullets.


EXT. WOODS - CAVE - NIGHT

At the foot of the mountain is a cave. Victoria sees it.

The men are closing in.

                      MAN
           She's heading for the cave!

Just ahead of them, Victoria disappears into the cave.


INT. CAVE - NIGHT

The cave is filled with bats.

A smile crosses Victoria's lips. One would think she was
home. She moves deeper into the cave.

The men enter. Lights dart through the darkness.

Bats flutter everywhere.

                      MAN
           There!

A light falls on something on the ground: it is Victoria's
gown. She's disappeared, leaving her gown behind her.

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FADE IN:


EXT. NOB HILL BAR & GRILL - DAY

A bar and cafe in a suburban neighborhood.


INT. NOB HILL BAR & GRILL - TABLE - DAY

At a table are Robert BASS, known as "Bear", and Red HOOKER.
Two retired old men over breakfast. They've done this
thousands of times before.

They eat a moment in silence. They know one another so well
they don't have to talk much.

Hooker pushes an envelope across the table.

                         HOOKER
             Happy birthday. You don't look a
             day over eighty.

Bass stares at the envelope. It clearly contains a card.

                         BASS
             How long have we known each other?

                         HOOKER
             Fifty years or more.

                         BASS
             Fifty-two. I don't remember ever
             getting a birthday card from you.

                         HOOKER
             Who said it's a birthday card?

Bass opens the envelope and finds...

A GREETING CARD

showing an airplane trailing a sign that says "Bon Voyage!"

                         BASS
             You're taking a trip?

                         HOOKER
             We are. The original manuscript
             of Kerouac's "On the Road" is on
             display at the Smithsonian all
             month. I think we should go see it.

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FADE IN:

EXT. BEAUTILINE INC. - CAMPUS - NIGHT

The campus-like setting of a modern corporation. Behind a large, "glassy" central building, smaller buildings are connected by paths through lawns and flower beds. Modern lamps light the way.

EXT. BEAUTILINE INC. - R&D BUILDING - NIGHT

Waiting in front of the Research and Development Building is ANDY BUNNING, late 20s. He shuffles from foot to foot. Impatient.

Across the way a GUARD exits a building. He heads toward R&D.

Andy mouths "Oh shit" and enters the building.

INT. BEAUTILINE INC. - OFFICE - NIGHT

A copy machine is at work in a dark office. Operating it is RAY BUNNING, 40ish.

He takes documents from a folder, copying them one at a time. As fast as he can.

Andy appears in the doorway.

ANDY: Guard's coming!

Ray replies without looking up.

RAY: Almost done.

ANDY: There's no time.

RAY: I'll meet you at the back door.

ANDY: Ray ...

No use. Andy leaves.

EXT. BEAUTILINE INC. - R&D BUILDING - NIGHT

The guard is closer. He's whistling, relaxed. Just another night. Nothing ever happens.

INT. BEAUTILINE INC. - OFFICE - NIGHT

Ray is still copying.

INT. BEAUTILINE INC. - BACK DOOR - NIGHT

Andy waits, more impatient than ever. He shouts into the dark hallway in a strained whisper.

ANDY: Goddamn it, Ray!

EXT. BEAUTILINE INC. - R&D BUILDING - NIGHT

The guard puts a key in the front door.

INT. BEAUTILINE INC. - BACK DOOR - NIGHT

Ray joins Andy. He carries a briefcase.

RAY: All done.

They head out the back door.

EXT. BEAUTILINE INC. - R&D BUILDING - BACK AREA - NIGHT

The brothers move quickly away.

ANDY: I don't think this is a good idea.

RAY: Too late now.

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